Alien Poem by Alvin Mutuku

Alien

Rating: 1.0


An unknown creature,
With unknown features
Known for flying through space
With no time to waste.
What a wonderful creature!

A creature believed to live on Mars
Never have ever seen shining stars.
A creature of high intelligence
That leads to great confidence.
What a wonderful creature!
(By Alvin Mutuku)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 28 November 2024

well, I did NOT totally dislike this poem. But, how could the creature fly through space and not see stars? ? Perhaps a feature (unknown) was its lack of visual perception? : )

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Abraham Not Lincoln 28 November 2024

Bad absolutely bad a poem without any meaning

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