Alien Attraction Poem by Dereck Gibbs

Alien Attraction

Rating: 5.0


A magnetic pull
Like the positive to my negative
An irresistible attraction
Like moth to a flame

Caught by this seduction
Praying not to fall
But stumbling always
Like a foolish drunk

I get so high on you
Floating on cloud nine
I drift, I float, captivated by who?
None other than my princess, my boo

The yang to my ying
She brings joy to my soul,
Like picture to the blind
Sound to the deaf

I feel like a, love virgin
This foreign sensation
Like, aliens here to abduct me
Testing my, emotive capacity

Traction beam pulling
Casting away hesitation
I throw myself in willingly
Desperate to escape this planet lonely

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 27 June 2009

Very catchy title and wonderful imagery. Last clinching line uplifts the poem to a new meaning of alien attraction. Keep up, Dereck! Best Wishes Naseer

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Dereck Gibbs

Dereck Gibbs

trinidad and tobago
Close
Error Success