Aliveness Poem by Ray Lucero

Aliveness

Rating: 5.0


There’s an entire ocean,
In a single raindrop!

A Universe in your blood!

On this small planet,
Why selfish pleasures?

Why endless reaching?

Are you hoping this will,
Make you feel more alive?

Go within…

Swim in your aliveness
Feel the vastness...
Know your True Self

ROTMS

(Inspired by Rumi)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lucianne Fasolo 05 February 2008

That's a very wise pice of advice, :) Everyone should follow it. I liked this so much. And I really do see some change in your writing! A good change, of course! :)

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