Thursday, September 13, 2007

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She asked me my name,
And I told her “I’m Zach”
But truly I’m nothing
But taken aback
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Nisho Olme
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Effie Yalena Steyn 16 December 2007

Stirring and empathetic. I like your style of writing, the rhyme could have sounded forced but it didnt. Well done. Effie xx

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