All Alone Poem by phoenix keesie

All Alone

Rating: 5.0


sitting all alone
with a broken heart
broken hopes
broken spirit
everythng is broken
why did you ruin everything?
what did i do wrong?
i wanted to gain your love
but all i did
was lose my best friend
and everything i love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dayna Verhulst 07 January 2010

nice poem but hearts get broken and take time to heel i am still heeling from one guy that shattered my heart years ago (i have had boyfriends since but always got dumped for being to......wary i guess)

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DaNa XxX 11 June 2009

THAT'S SO SAD! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Darkness Everywhere 10 May 2009

well done its really good 10

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Gordon Wilkinson 09 March 2009

Chin up it happens to us all even the oldies like me - well written 10

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phoenix keesie

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weatherford, oklahoma
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