All Alone Poem by belen depaz

All Alone



All alone in my bed
A creepy voice in my head
Life dosen't fright me at all

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fatima Baradia 22 May 2009

belen yes the way mr.b stated it life doesnt frighten me at all

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James Harradine 19 May 2009

firstly, learn to spell. 'dosen't' is actually doesn't. and learn some grammar, ' fright' should be frighten. then learn how to write a poem, not three lines.

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