All Alone Poem by belen depaz

All Alone



All alone in my bed
A creepy voice in my head
Life dosen't fright me at all

Tuesday, May 19, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: alone
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fatima Baradia 22 May 2009

belen yes the way mr.b stated it life doesnt frighten me at all

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James Harradine 19 May 2009

firstly, learn to spell. 'dosen't' is actually doesn't. and learn some grammar, ' fright' should be frighten. then learn how to write a poem, not three lines.

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