All I See In Him Poem by kendra swan

All I See In Him

Rating: 5.0


All i see in him is hope, fear, regret, and pain.
I caused him pain when i left.
He regrets causing me to leave,
But he hopes i will forgive him.
He fears i won't though.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Liliana Roman 12 May 2011

it is short and simple. however it makes me think and feel. it makes me think about how hard it is to tell people good bye and it makes me feel the hurt in say good bye. you get a gold star! ! your a very good poet.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 02 May 2011

Nice poem with plenty of depth. Beautifully conceived. Good vivid imagery. Great stuff. A perfect...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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