All i see in him is hope, fear, regret, and pain.
I caused him pain when i left.
He regrets causing me to leave,
But he hopes i will forgive him.
He fears i won't though.
Nice poem with plenty of depth. Beautifully conceived. Good vivid imagery. Great stuff. A perfect...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2
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I would like to translate this poem
it is short and simple. however it makes me think and feel. it makes me think about how hard it is to tell people good bye and it makes me feel the hurt in say good bye. you get a gold star! ! your a very good poet.