Broken Inside Poem by kendra swan

Broken Inside

Rating: 4.2


i seem happy but deep down i'm broken inside.
i don't try to show it because no ONE knows how i feel inside.
and i can't express the way i feel.
in some words i can like: lost, careless, and confused

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 19 April 2012

Outburst of the heart beautifully embedded on this short but well penned write! Talent and feelings are clearly also shown in this touching write! Dear Kendra, we all go through that stage one time or another but we manage to survive because we grow through this experience! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Rome from New York City!

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Liliana Roman 28 November 2011

short and deep, i liked it!

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Ramesh Rai 22 November 2011

Xlent little poetess. you have expressed the nice message. no one should reveal one's pain

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