All I Think About Poem by Sara Panicali

All I Think About

Rating: 4.0


with you not in my life
I'm losing my mind
more and more everyday

I think how we used to lay at night
holding each other so close
talking about forever
and no matter what happens
we would be there for each other
through good and bad

Everyday I think
about the great times we shared
the connection we had, couldn't get any better
and the times we've helped each other through

Now, all that seems so far away
without you,
everyday that goes by
there's not a time I don't think of ending my own life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria C. Pires Costa 16 January 2012

Your feelings and emotions have brought a genuine writing. Sara, please treasure your memories, keep being strong and determined to pursue your brighter days! All the best to you! Keep sharing your threads.

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June Smithster 06 November 2011

eye have been depressed for many years the mind plays tricks the girl refused my gift but when eye think harder eye remember she took the cookies those eye brought her from my Mother

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Kevin Patrick 04 November 2011

I agree with Abdallah any person who does not take the time or consideration to reciprocate what you give to them is not worth your attention, never think about killing yourself for someone else. Im glad yuo dont because it allows you to write these nice naratives. Congrats Sara 10/10

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Abdallah Gamal 03 November 2011

Although it seems so sad but it's magnificent. You love him, so if he doesn't share you the same emotion, then he doesn't deserve you.

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