All Mixed Up Poem by SharonAnn Dawson

All Mixed Up

Rating: 5.0


I could wake up in the morning
feeling sad and blue
all depressing feelings thrown away
at the thought of you

You came into my life
looking happy but well worn
and now you leave me sitting here
with a heart well and truly torn

Into several pieces taking hope
as well as my peace
my head is doing overtime
while i lay flat without a crease

Fantasising of that final climax
lying desolate in my room
yearning for the beggining
my heart craves, only doom

It feels like a sudden loss
but infact there was never a start
you could never feel the way i feel
that constant aching in my heart

Perpetual hope fading
Eternal love dejected
i want you more than ever before
even though i know ive been rejected

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Oldham 03 October 2008

my favourite of ur poems so far... keep it up, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

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