All Suffocating Poem by Sara Hol

All Suffocating

Rating: 5.0


A layout of pictures overcrowd my walls,
with each second; all becomes severed and falls

Their destiny awaits, to crowd my face,
burying me deep with their paper embrace.

I panic to breathe, as sharp corners attack
I have extreme paranoia, that I can never turn back.

Minutes fall to seconds, my fate penetrating
an epiphany; my life seems to be an empty, worthless war
to where I struggle to swim, and can never reach shore.

In future generations, the past, the current time today
we have achieved discreet knowledge and fear,
with less to gain

My theory is simple, and easy enough to prove
we are all suffocating, with everything to lose

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Erika Wingo 27 September 2012

You are a very gifted writer and you have a way with words. There is not a single one of your poems that I did not enjoy. They are all very good, I hope you continue to write!

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