Graham Jones

All Wrinkled And Faded. - Poem by Graham Jones

Old snapshots in broken drawers
Through lack of light now show their flaws
Wrinkled and faded, a reflection of truth
A testament to the pssing of youth

Thoughts scramble to purchase a grip
Were these taken local, or out on a trip?
So long ago forgotten faces
Family friends, familiar places

Disjointed, fragmented, slots in time
Resurface now, through the dust and the grime
Mingled emotions as they now appear
Linger like smoke and then disappear

Children grown up, now middle aged
Pose for photographs, clearly staged
A catalogue of my life, my past
The years have come and gone so fast

Husband, father, and now grandad
I had my day as jack the lad
Snapshots from another time
Replaced in drawers, for others to find.

Comments about All Wrinkled And Faded. by Graham Jones

  • (4/3/2006 12:54:00 PM)

    Enjoyable Read....warm regards, ....xx (Report) Reply

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  • (4/3/2006 11:42:00 AM)

    In general, Graham, I think this is a lovely, rhythmic and wistful piece of writing. There are one or two points that I feel could be worked on, though:
    *Consistency of rhythm. I feel you can achieve full consistency, Graham. I'd certainly like to see line 3 section 4 with greater metrical balance (along with a few others) .
    *Sequencing. I feel section 3 ought to precede section 2. In the current sequencing, when I reached section 3 I felt as if you were coming back on yourself.
    *'Purchase a grip'. I feel you can find a more...picturesque expression here.
    *Correct 'pssing' to 'passing'.
    I mean these comments with goodwill, Graham.
    Warmest wishes, Gina.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 3, 2006

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