All Your Superficiality Poem by Jess Terry

All Your Superficiality



All your F***ing superficiality,
is going through my mind,
all of your shallowness,
its a total waste of time

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jessica Rose 18 July 2008

hey paul! just a little thing here.... Its called being very angry at someone and writing a rather nasty little poem about them. You should try it some time. Very... interesting.

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Paul Buttigieg 12 April 2008

Jessica, Do not write with such profanity.......... The best messages in poetry are done with clever use of the language. Profanity does not lend itself to most readers. All the same this was a nice piece of writing. Just trying to help.

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