Confidential Poem by Jess Terry

Confidential

Rating: 4.5


top secret,
confidential,
your feelings locked up,
like some government project

yet you'll tell these problems,
to someone,
you think is a stranger,
where in fact its closer to home then you think

No one but me,
knows how your feeling,
yet im your worst enemy,
you think im some one im not

the old saying goes:
shame on you if you fooled me once,
shame on me if you fooled me twice,
i've fooled you more than once

so now you see,
the jokes on you,
im laughing about your gullibility,
yet crying for your sadness

top secret,
confidential,
your feelings locked up,
like some goernment project

(26/11/2006)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sean Joyce 13 February 2008

Yes I agree with both of the above this is good and you really do have your own voice. Thanks. Sean

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Emancipation Planz 21 October 2007

I agree with Stug, you have a voice that oozes of projects filled with the secret x and y factors.. well done, , , One peace at a time, Deana...

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Stug Jordan 04 April 2007

This is really clever. Flows nicely but more importantly I can hear your voice. A voice in your poetry is something NOT everyone has. You have honesty and a wonderful way of expressing yourself. S x

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