Allure Opened Poem by Genice Lorraine De Fabriciano

Allure Opened



Oh my love
open the door
my mighty man
the one I adore
with so much more
I'll open your door
you have opened my allure
with letters of spirit treasures
love writings galore
memories for evermore
as we continue to soar
an outline of our hearts
sacred love's soothing parts
collide a bursting in air
meshing souls to bare
dance as one we dare
sparks fly through this pair
where I begin-you end
where you flow-I bend
as hearts take flight
into dark castle's night

Allure Opened
Saturday, September 23, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: castle,door,love,man,open,poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 01 October 2017

As a poet whose specialty is love poetry, I am qualified to review and offer feedback. Are you still 17? Amazing poem, to be written by a minor with the mind of a woman. This is very good, Genice. Please continue writing!

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