Alone Poem by Michael S

Alone

Rating: 4.7


Where am I going, what am I doing
Life is all that? ? ! an illusion ….
A night vision of a domestic cat? !

I know that I’ll reach somewhere
I know that I’ll be and I dare
I dare to live …to be and to love
Here around and high above

I feel that you’re somewhere
Waiting to live and to share
We’ll meet someday, it's our fate
Maybe today, maybe tomorrow …
It will never be too late

I feel you, a piece of all
I want you, body, spirit and soul
Give me a sign and say you’re my other
I promise I will, and there will be no other

Flying up high is too hard to bet
Be here ….everything seems easy to get
Sublimation, evaluation ….
You have the right of a sensation
Just give it all, don’t be afraid to fall
You’re my all ….I’m your all.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Osborne 02 June 2006

I feel you, a piece of all I want you, body, spirit and soul Give me a sign and say you’re my other I promise I will, and there will be no other Excellent. I can see your talent developing. To be a writer all we have to do is write. I agree, there is talent here.

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Kimberly Kastner 01 June 2006

I agree with Nimal-this really is an interesting poem of longing. You have real talent!

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David Gerardino 31 May 2006

A night vision of a domestic cat, great line................

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 07 January 2006

'...and I'm enthralled' with your poem! Nicely done and senstive, emotional, strong and determined. I like it! LSP

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