Wednesday, April 18, 2012

Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Alone he wakes to greet each day
Nothing to do, nothing to say
Watching the sun make it's rise
Another day of silent cries
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Dale Totten
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Roseann Shawiak 18 January 2014

Intense emotion throughout the poem, very well written. Makes me want to reach out and hug this person. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Neela Nath Das 20 April 2012

Well crafted. Emotion and the rhyme scheme work very nicely.

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Romeo Della Valle 19 April 2012

WELCOME to the Poetry World! Like a Champ dear Dale, you has entered into the Poetry World with a beautiful and well crafted write that is rich in imagery and a lovely rhymes scheme! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! You got what it takes to make all the way to the top! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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