Alone Without You Comments

I like this poem but also I must add the more I read the poem I pick up a rhythm and that rhythm sets me on a downward trend. A violin can be played up(in sound) and also down(in sound) . For variation and enhancement words can be tuned to have a similar effect. The only way is up, so aim your poem in that direction. Best wishes and keep writing. Cleveland

so Sad! breaks my heart