Tuesday, August 25, 2015

Always Put The Next Step Carefully Comments

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Nothing from prior
Nothing from previous
Nothing from the past
Absolutely nothing
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Aniket Nikhade
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Roseann Shawiak 03 September 2015

Another really insightful message in this poem, you are very good at eliciting the gist of a situation. or circumstance. Again, as I have stated before in a comment, repeating the same words over and over again, detracts from the essence of it. Your work will shine into the world with just a little polish - i.e. thought. Thank you for sharing, I really do love your style of writing, it's very good! RoseAnn

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Kelly Kurt 25 August 2015

~To plan for the future is wise to obsess about it is foolish

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Aniket Nikhade 25 August 2015

Thank you so much for reading my poem and giving your feedback. Thank you for going through my poem and telling the gist of the story precisely in one line. Thank you. Thank you for your words of appreciation.

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