Am I Dead? Poem by Edder Ramirez

Am I Dead?

Rating: 2.5


its so quiet.
i feel so cold.
am i dead?
i see a room.
There is nothing there only a picture of me.
Where am i?
has the world died?
Am i dead?
No....
i cant be.
i keep on walking this hallway so narrow, so long.
i see a door i open it.
im shock what my eyes are seeing.
i see myself....
im dead.
who killed me?
i run as fast as i can to find answers.
i find another room i see you, my love.
and im shocked what i found out.
my love you killed me.
why did you?
what ever the reason is i hope you feel happy for what you've done, because now im dead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
g black black 16 February 2010

what a sad poem whoo its so beautiful, , this is the best poem of the day

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