Jasmine Smith

Am I Invisible? - Poem by Jasmine Smith

As you begin to ignore me,
I drown in my tears,
Will you ever see sense,
Or listen with your ears?

Their seems to be a wall between us,
I dont remeber being close?
Being that much time,
Its you im missing the most.

Its hard to see sense,
In the dilemma that your in,
But dont take it out on me,
Im still your kid.

Im turning 16 next year,
Yeah i dont act my age.
But seems trying to take some advice,
Is like finding that loose page.

Im reading you like an interesting book,
Every page, is a new story.
If you just look back,
To how you used to be,
Its the better,
The nicer,
The stress free,
New me.

So now ive said it,
A secret ive kept in for years,
But you need to see how i feel,
As im the only one picking up the dirt.

This is not my problem,
But hopefully youlle recognize,
That even though this is breaking my heart,
You will soon start to realize.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Its about a young girl, who was once close to her mother. Due to the relationship her mother is in, it seems she thinks she's invisible as she treats her much differently, and thinks that her mum isn't being affectionate know more.

Comments about Am I Invisible? by Jasmine Smith

  • Brian Jani (5/19/2014 9:38:00 AM)

    Jasmine smith well done (Report) Reply

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  • (5/21/2012 6:16:00 AM)

    i like the flow of the poem... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 21, 2012

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