Tuesday, April 24, 2018

Am Very Busy Comments

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Do you think I'm very little man?
Wide like an ocean,
Am very busy.
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Jonathan Tafreg
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Jazib Kamalvi 25 April 2018

Write comment. A good start, Jonathan. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Gajanan Mishra 24 April 2018

wide like an ocean, good like

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Jonathan Tafreg 24 April 2018

Just a matter of poetic licence, and aesthetic necessity. Thanks for your comment, I have taken it to the heart.

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