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! Amused! - Poem by GAYATRI NAMBIAR

He mused and mused
and mused on my
neon moon and torched
the glowing filaments
in hundreds of thousands
tiny splinters and painted
darkness and covered
his sun face under dark
smokes of clouds...
Amused, I am left
with only tiny candles
on my platen to light
my idioms....

July 1,2009

Comments about ! Amused! by GAYATRI NAMBIAR

  • (7/1/2009 1:39:00 AM)

    Very nice. Marvelous write. (Report) Reply

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  • (7/1/2009 12:55:00 AM)

    candles speak more than anything else........ you portrayed very well.... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 1, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, July 5, 2009

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