! Amused! Poem by GAYATRI NAMBIAR

! Amused!

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He mused and mused
and mused on my
neon moon and torched
the glowing filaments
in hundreds of thousands
tiny splinters and painted
darkness and covered
his sun face under dark
smokes of clouds...
Amused, I am left
with only tiny candles
on my platen to light
my idioms....



July 1,2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ch J Satyananda Kumar 01 July 2009

Very nice. Marvelous write.

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rago rago 01 July 2009

candles speak more than anything else........ you portrayed very well....

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