! Broken Heart ! Poem by GAYATRI NAMBIAR

! Broken Heart !

Rating: 2.8


He gave his heart to me
and I broke it into pieces
with my harsh mindless
words, In turn he broke
mine with one heavy
iron hammer
And the broken pieces
transformed into elements
and float on the wings
of one annoyed ocean...



May 15,2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alina Khan 05 June 2009

all of youre poems are very stimulating and appealing. excellent work :)

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 03 June 2009

Very good idea. Ms. Gayatri Nambiar

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T S 16 May 2009

This Poem reflects two Broken hearted people perfectly 10/10

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rago rago 16 May 2009

heart rendering poem.......presented well and beautifully penned.........

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Hannah Benson 16 May 2009

sort but sweet i understand what you mean i love it

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