An Elegy For The Metallic Flower Poem by Fedel Lester del Rosario

An Elegy For The Metallic Flower



A beautiful girl, beautiful as a flower,

Has come to my life once.

Her petals brought color to my life.

She taught me things,

Things that strucked me like a knife.

It may hurt but it really leaves some scars,

Scars that can't be remove.

And as a flower, she is fragile,

Fragile when you make fun of her.


This fragile flower is just like Superman,

She's a Girl of Steel.

Hard, hard ti get by her suitors.

Still, very still in her opinion,

Specially when she's right.

And shines up among other girls,

Because of being a smart, beautiful, and talented girl.

She never gave up on anything.

That trait of her is what I learned the best.


Because of being a flower and a Girl of Steel,

I call her The Metallic Flower.

But somehow The Metallic Flower rusted.

And hitted by a ten-wheeler truck.

And she was delivered directly to a morgue.

Tuesday, January 1, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: beautiful,elegy,flower,girl,smart
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This elegy is for my cousin Grace Reyes. In an age of 14, she died with her brother in an accident. They were hit by a ten-wheeler truck, and declared dead-on-the-spot, year 2012. She is just like a mother to me. She taught me things which makes me who am I now. And because of that, we're just like the same person but one difference you can find in us is that I am lazy while she is a hard-working person. She is one of the most important person in my life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 01 January 2013

Because of being a flower. Good. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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