Yes, Elmer. Another lovely piece with a pleasing structure. You have a great 'feel' for poetry and that's something (like having good pitch) that cannot be 'taught'. I like the images you use in the second stanza. Love poems need more than protestations of love. I look forward to reading more of your work. love, Allie xxxx
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Yes, Elmer. Another lovely piece with a pleasing structure. You have a great 'feel' for poetry and that's something (like having good pitch) that cannot be 'taught'. I like the images you use in the second stanza. Love poems need more than protestations of love. I look forward to reading more of your work. love, Allie xxxx