An Evening Walk Poem by Gururaj B S

An Evening Walk

Rating: 5.0


Out I come from my dwelling,
to take an evening stroll,
little do I actually realize,
how much life has taken its toll.

Entering into the greener fields,
all I hear are sober birds,
The very illusion of fields being green,
tells a tale than do any words.

A lone bare tree stands apart,
unperturbed by the surrounded lot,
a withered leaf comes rattling down,
disturbed, I fear not, by my thought.

I turn around to return and alas!
Where to go I've no clue,
all I pick is a fading aster flower,
to deliver a smile to you.

Monday, February 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A poem describing the realization of emptiness in life, and how a person almost always lives in a fake illusion that he is made to believe. It, however, ends with a hope that towards the end of it, he is finally able to identify his real purpose in life and start walking towards it, rather than being engulfed in fake realism all the time.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 28 February 2015

Nice piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with insight. A turning point in life backed by faith well depicted in the poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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