Friday, March 21, 2014

An Helpless Man Comments

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You come with some voice of knocks
To the ground house of windows
where all wreathed grey
You hit there
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Beyza Dut
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V P Mahur 24 March 2014

Dear Beyza, Welcome to the world of the poetry. I read your poem and felt that you have a unique sense of expression. Keep it up. I want to shar ethis one with you. I hope you will like it. Thanks! .......................... 'Destination Of Love' ......................... Please reply.

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Beyza Dut 22 March 2014

so plesurable to hear that my poem has enlightened in smart way with your nice and appreciative words

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Susan Lacovara 22 March 2014

Within the first few lines, I pictured a father..and upon seeing your notes, congratulate you on a write that well depicts the story. A lot t of emotions spilled into your lines...an emptying of what the heart long holds. PEACE

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