An Hour Late Poem by Dennis Go

An Hour Late



An hour late
And the option
To continue waiting
Remains,
Whether or not
Patience
Is a virtue.

A short notice
To leave
Besets choices
Whether or not
Criticisms
Mark the temper
Of a tired man.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 11 January 2010

This has a close terse feel Dennis and written from the state of a 'tired man' the piece highlights 'waiting' as nevertheless bringing it's own choice of - - - for'how long'. An intimate verse which stays within the reader's mind...10 from Fay.

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Dennis Go

Dennis Go

Manila, Philippines
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