A Beating Drum Poem by Dennis Go

A Beating Drum

Rating: 5.0


A beating drum...
Pounding... pounding...

Steadfast tunes
Wavering.

For the moment
Silence listens.

For a moment
Loudness beckons
To the beat heard
Staggering
The empty form.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Atef Ayadi 10 January 2010

I CAN HEAR THE SOUND OF THE DRUM.... THE PICTURE IS OBSCURE.... AFTER ALL A DRUM BEAT IS A HEART BEAT BEATEN A DARK RACING A MEMORY.

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Sonya Florentino 15 January 2010

i like this...silence listening to the sound filling up the emptiness....

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Chitra - 13 January 2010

intriguing write...read in between the lines, or should i say in between the beats nice one

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Sally Plumb Plumb 12 January 2010

Was this a war drum?

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Rinki Nandy 11 January 2010

insightful, like the way you have left the choice of comparison of the drum to.....the reader.

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Eyan Desir 10 January 2010

Short and to the point good write

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Dennis Go

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Manila, Philippines
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