Thursday, April 21, 2016

An Incredible Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

A young mother sits
With a test in her hand
Doesn't know what to do
A baby is growing
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Dori Spooner
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Antonio Williams 30 April 2016

a motherly love, and a motherly heart is a gift. liked your effectiveness on contrasting the two young women. thank you for sharing!

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Chinedu Dike 22 April 2016

Lovely piece of poetry that depicts the softness and sublime nature of mother's love, well articulated and nicely penned in good rhyme scheme with insight. I concur with your conviction on adorption. Thanks for sharing Dori.

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