Friday, June 5, 2015

An Insomniac's Night Comments

Rating: 4.5

Dusk falls, darkness sets in moments after
Night falls, grows darker and darker
Soothing breeze relaxes my senses
But when I try to close my eyes, I never fall into a state deeper
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Ratri Mandal
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Chinedu Dike 05 June 2015

The unfortunate and deplorable medical condition, insomnia, which robs sleep off eyes of the afflicted, well depicted in the poem. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Ratri Mandal 07 June 2015

Thank You!

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