Sunday, August 13, 2017

An Unsaid Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

An usual was the place,
My eyes had fallen upon.
Unique the way I felt,
A bliss of magic current,
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Rajendran Yesheswini
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Chinedu Dike 13 August 2017

Very heartfelt. An insightful depiction of the power of love - the feelings are truly overpowering, as captured in the poem. Thanks for sharing Rajendran.

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Bharati Nayak 13 August 2017

The pain and angst of unrequited love has been penned so nicely.The question ever tormenting- - Does she ever remember me? To quote from this beautiful poem- - Will I see you ever again? Has the charm and smile forever gone? Is a bit of me really remaining? Repeated the verses in my depressed mind.

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