Ancient Address Poem by Satish Verma

Ancient Address

Rating: 5.0


Black emptiness.
Death opens like a flower,
somebody is walking in.

You think of a soft punishment
for becoming faithless.
It was becoming a way of life.

Unlimited agony of wait
something to happen.
Nothing is heard in the field.

No shots. No kill.
Your day was over.
Night descends like a puzzle.

Grey cornea on the white lens:
clouds are playing a game,
mist has a smoky smell.

A city sleeps at last.
A poem I will not read.
It was my ancient address.

Wednesday, September 26, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: emptiness,punishment
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patrick McFarland 25 November 2007

The spirit of Haiku is alive (and more than) well in this poem. Beautifully written.

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