Velvet thorns
become signature
of my pain and joy.
Body paints the naked earth
blue. Eyes in hot desert
search red poles and blue moon.
Emotional strife:
dripping accidents with sum flowers,
extremely talkative.
Then the words litter
on white paper. Very sad,
you leave nothing between the waits.
Dawn to dusk, pleasing the gods.
An owl on each branch
disregarding the stars.
I left a comment earlier, but Poem Hunter seems to have lost it. I'm having trouble connecting the content of you r poem to the title, but it a fascinating poem in any case. Congrats on having it selected as poem of the day.
I left a comment earlier, but Poem Hunter seems to have lost it. I'm having trouble connecting the content of your poem to the title, but it is a fascinating poem in any case. Congrats on having it selected as poem of the day.
Dear Sir, First of all congratulations for being the poet of the day! 'Generosity' is a poem ridden with intense emotion, loss and pain. A full score of 10!
Velvet thorns become signature of my pain and joy. - - - - - - - - - A beautiful poem on creative process that transforms emotional strife into pieces of writing.
Down to dusk, pleasing the gods. Heartiest congratulations on the poem of the Day.
Intriguing work. The apposition of vivid imagery and mysterious intent give the reader the pleasant pause of contemplation.
Dawn to dusk, pleasing the gods. An owl on each branch disregarding the stars. Congrats for the poem of the day. 10 for it. Subhas
Of my pain and joy! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
sir congratulation.... a touchy one with high diction and images... really i enjoy it... Velvet thorns become signature of my pain and joy.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Congrats on poem of the day, although I'm having trouble connecting the content with the title. A fascinating poem, nevertheless.