And I Know I Can Do Nothing For Her Poem by Charles Chaim Wax

And I Know I Can Do Nothing For Her

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suddenly eighty-four
this woman I have watched for fifty years
her back low now
since the old man
moved in with death
and she didn’t
alone and not knowing
how to be alone.
“How do you feel today? ” I ask.
She says, “The problems of life.”
no more than that
each breath a whisper of absence
as little by little she drowns in a puddle.

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kskdnj sajn 27 March 2006

To be left alone, and to lose companionship, unbearable..but to lose ones independence in society, ...makes coping difficult if ever possible. Great poem.

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Hugh Cobb 27 March 2006

Your presence alone is something done for another, a gift of interaction of acknowledgment of humanity shared that is a lot more than nothing. Compassion is the Buddha's way and it is evident in each word. Fine poem.

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Sandra Fowler 27 March 2006

Just being there is sometimes enough. Praise for your warm concern for this lonely soul. Regards, Sandra Fowler

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