Thursday, September 13, 2007

And The World Kept Silent Comments

Rating: 5.0

I tried to stop the world from laughing
As I failed again
And though the world stopped for a while
I knew I couldn’t win
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Nisho Olme
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Malini Kadir 03 December 2007

loved the flow and feelings poured in it...... but young man, each man in this world who was not born with a silver spoon in his mouth has to find his own feet and believe me it is a game of plus and minus...... Read my poem life is a zero game..........cheers!

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... Lynch 16 September 2007

Great rhyme and flow, nice write. -Kylie M. Lynch

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