Angel's Goodbye Poem by Darnaryel Fantaisie

Angel's Goodbye

Rating: 5.0


A golden sky, the sunset on your skin,
You are running on the beach
The sand under your feet
It seems you are the infinity

I can still remember that time
I was proud by your side
Your whole world was nothing but bright
You were the true beauty of mine


Now you are not there anymore
And the sand is just an ocean of pain
And the sun is just the light of desperation
And the world is just the proof you are gone


Anywhere you are, can you still hear it?
Can you hear that song? we met on it!
Can you feel that my heart's bleeding?
Can you see that without you I am nothing?


Where have you been?
Where are you still?
Can I go somewhere and find you?
Can I do something to find you?

Nothing seems normal anymore!
Did you take the time with you?
Did you change the world's colors?
Did you break my heart in two?

I'm looking up and see it is wrong!
Did you fill the sky with clouds?
Did you turn to grey the world?
Please bring it back to normal!


Come back to me and bring back my smile!
From me take away those tears!
They are streaming right inside of me!
No one can see but it weighs on me all the time!


I'm wondering, will I smile again?
I'm wondering, will I find a way?
I'm wondering, will I see your face?
I'm wondering, will I feel Your breath?


Now I'm just the shadow of myself!
Memory of the time you were my shelter!
And no matter what I'll try tonight,
I'll never bring you back to life!

Thursday, April 21, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: despair,goodbye,loneliness,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 23 March 2015

A great poem that touched the heart and soul. The emotions rise like tide of an ocean bringing beautiful words like shining pearls................10

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Adeline Foster 19 September 2011

We can feel your loss and heartache. However this does need some spelling and grammar adjustments. Adeline

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Romeo Della Valle 24 April 2011

This excellent and well crafted write caught my attention! Whenever is see the word angel it reminds me when I wrote: AN ANGER AND A VIOLIN and A MISSING ANGEL. Your writing skills is admiring!

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