Anger Poem by David J.Taylor

Anger

Rating: 5.0


anger is like a shaken bottle of Coke,
bottles containing bubbly coke are filled,
and if shaken by any girl or bloke,
tense pressure in the bottle starts to build.

If they continue to give it a shake,
the bottled pressure continues to grow
more bottled up pressure they start to make,
until that pressure is ready to blow

eventually it needs to be let out,
that angry pressure cannot be kept in,
it will make a big mess as it blows out,
anger by far is one of the worst sins.

so dont bottle your anger up unless,
you wanna blow and make a massive mess.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 07 July 2011

Great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. I really liked and rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4.

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