Another Attempt Poem by Shane Abrams

Another Attempt

Rating: 4.3


He sees the blood
Crimson pain
As he feared
Again the same

Crying in the dark
As he did before
Another tear
To go with another sore

The fire consumes him
Taking his heart
Everything inside
Just falling apart

Spiteful words
Break his heart
As he leaves
Away from thought

He presses the blade
Deeper within
Again no one there
As his life does fade

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Nagy 07 December 2005

I can't say I ''enjoyed'' reading this Shane..........it breaks my heart to think you've experienced so much pain. Very emotional poem. I hope you continue writing. Sincerely, Mary

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Ashka Pandya 07 December 2005

wow.this is really a very good poem..liked it..gets 9.. ASHKA

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