Wednesday, December 7, 2005

Another Attempt Comments

Rating: 4.3

He sees the blood
Crimson pain
As he feared
Again the same
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Shane Abrams
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Mary Nagy 07 December 2005

I can't say I ''enjoyed'' reading this Shane..........it breaks my heart to think you've experienced so much pain. Very emotional poem. I hope you continue writing. Sincerely, Mary

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Ashka Pandya 07 December 2005

wow.this is really a very good poem..liked it..gets 9.. ASHKA

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