Another Chance Comments

yes i do want to...always...new paths...the untrodden ones are the best...explore little girl but be prepared to gracefully accept the concequences...they teach great lessons...to err is human...and to rise from it needs a strong heart and mind...have fun with life...love...nalini

It shows that you are somehow a revolutionary or radicalism teenagers, as what I am some years ago.

i like the poem, i think its better than the others and your very good at using imagery, it still seems a bit disjointed though, if u know what i mean.

old life is over and the new one begins Been here before and now again this could flourish or wilt and die Better take the chance jump into new life in this poem - I would like to shed my deep feeling on imagery you used here