Another Lesson Was Learned Poem by Aiesha Freela

Another Lesson Was Learned

Rating: 5.0


He broke my heart
now its raining
try not to rub it in

You say 'I told you so'
you knew it long ago
You knew we had to go
I finally came around, back on solid ground
can't let this get me down

Yes I was burned but I'm calling it a lesson learned

My mistake was overturned, so its a lesson learned

My soul has returned so I'm calling it a lesson learned

Another lesson was learned

Falling down ain't falling down if you don't cry when you hit the floor
And it's called it past because I'm getting past and I ain't anything like I was before, you should see me now

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Break up of relationship can be dismal. But, dear poet, that is not the end of the world. Think positive and move ahead. All the best…

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Kudakwashe Roak Mutama 10 March 2010

it's from the heart and the statement 'Another lesson learned' has in itself a sense of healing. l enjoyed it

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Ruth Campbell 13 February 2008

Yep, you made your point, but one could say it's a little repetitive. Ruth

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Philip Housiaux 25 January 2008

Very good work. A poem that is well suited to being read aloud with lots of nice simple thoughts that express universally recognised ideas and a repeating chorus that can be recited with lots of passion.

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Subbaraman N V 24 January 2008

Experience, the best Master, makes us learn many, many day in and day out!

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Aiesha Freela

Aiesha Freela

San Diego, California
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