Antagonism Poem by Brian V

Antagonism

Rating: 5.0


It all started with a single blow,
Between two rivals, and your homes.
It tragedy to watch whether you're a crow,
Or a pile of stones.

While the weak and the poor are inadequate,
To defend such a might able force.
Who will have the courage to dictate?
Of course, only a man with his might able horse,

That will guide us through the peril;
That will climb out the certain level.
To face his mirror of himself,
By converting his expectations to ourselves.


While the others have twisted minds,
With such mixture of philosophies.
They will stand until the breath of winds,
To make a new era of policies.

Until the beginning and end,
Where we make our amend.
To the others that we fought for,
It will be repeated like this before.

Not just the single blow,
But a new era of antagonism.
Merges into the depths from long ago,
To illuminate in the sight of realism.

Among others will see whats left,
Until the beginning and end,
where we make our amend.
Until the breath of the beast must rest.

Monday, March 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: hatred,war
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 10 March 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Brian V. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Brian Varino 10 March 2018

I already did it long ago when you commented on my poem, Magnificent Woman. This comment look kind of similar to the one just commented.But anyways, thank you so much for your positive criticism.

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 March 2018

Not just the single blow, But a new era of antagonism. Merges into the depths from long ago, To illuminate in the sight of realism.- - - - so true dear poet...... your obseervation.... is true......... our hatred, war, catastrophy, sufferings, death, bombing............ all for what...........we destroy the humanity......... thank you dear poet for your great thoughts.. tony

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Brian Varino 10 March 2018

I think you get theme here, and yes that what am I looking for. It mostly about war is pointless, and see the horrors of war. Thank you so much, Brian.

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