Tuesday, September 22, 2015

Apple Comments

Rating: 4.0

The humble apple is a thing of beauty.
It even has a sense of duty.
For eating one a day, they say,
Quite possibly, keeps the doctor away.
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Loke Kok Yee 02 October 2015

I am not too sure about the theory part but your poem is definitely right.. Thanks

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Kelly Kurt 22 September 2015

A fun, enjoyable poem to read, Winston. Keep on writing and you may achieve your dreams

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