Are You With Me? ? Poem by Ash win

Are You With Me? ?

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What should you feel
When you see your love walk away
He is there with you
And he isn't there too
How do I show him
It hurts that he is going away
What did I do
What should I do
That he forever remains
Should I just let go?
Is that what he wants?
For me to Let Go?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 07 January 2009

he will stay on, Ash...no worries...good piece that talks of distress...honest and frank...10

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