Breaking Free Poem by Ash win

Breaking Free

Rating: 5.0


I wanna Break free
from facade from fear
from lies from tears
Cut away the chains - that
make me sweet
I dont wanna be sweet
I dont wanna be nice
I dont wanna be someone
who goes on to sacrifice

I want to retire - into my world
Where Iam the ruler
Where Iam the world

Am not worried
Am not scared
There is no harm
There is no fear

My world is not the slumberland
It is the reality
It is the faith
It is the trust
It is the beauty
It is The Me

A spirit so free unbound by chains
I set myself free & let go the reins
Let the channels of the heart guide me
Now its just me and my heart to prove
Now am free through & through.....
I let myself go - Free
Into my world
Now am free
Now Iam - Me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 14 December 2008

freedom crave backed by burning desire and confidence...well written powerful piece...10

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Barbara Terry 16 October 2008

I have been saying this very thing all throughout my life, but no one heeded my desires and my needs, until about 8 years ago, when I was finally allowed to freely be me. You have written a very poweful piece Nandhini, a piece that others will be able to relate to. I give you a very solid 10 for this. Thank you for sharing. Hugs, Barbara

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