true emotions
don’t come easily.
not when trying to express
them without pretension
anyway. they fill the page
with their jaded and jagged
guises,
pretending to be hate when truly they’re
love. vice versa or any other combination.
they trick my mind
and fragment it more!
expression doesn’t come easily,
but when you’ve hit the nail
with the steel,
you’ll know that the picture
will
hang straight, un-jaded and
not jagged at all.
Mary X.
This one works very effectively - but it would be cooler to take out that exclamation mark.
You've hung this one dead true Mary. I really like it. Creative expression; the love/hate without pretension. Fine work. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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pretending to be hate when truly they’re love. vice versa or any other combination. they trick my mind and fragment it more! i like these llines in ur poem! ! ! pretention, emotions, fragments. life as it is uncovered. pain, sorrow, remorse.. is there also repentance! thank u for sharing this poem