Liza Sud


As A Blank Sheet - Poem by Liza Sud

As a blank crisp sheet
Falling from my hand –
In a room a sin,
Flowing from your side!

I breath by your lungs,
I smell by your nose
Chakras may combine,
But it’s dark for a rose.

Topic(s) of this poem: religious


Comments about As A Blank Sheet by Liza Sud

  • Daniel Brick (11/4/2015 7:12:00 AM)


    This is a poem extolling physical intimacy affirming spiritual intimacy; outer senses blend and inner senses or
    chakras blend. What was just a blank sheet is now electrified with psychic energy. Just to the right of the box I'm typing PH placed a list of RELATED POEMS-two are by the visionary William Blake, his early poem uniting opposites called THE MARRIAGE OF HEAVEN AND HELL (the ultimate pair of opposites unified!) and his last major poem JERUSALEM. I wrote a term paper on Jerusalem in college.Blake's ideas are like Solovyov's
    GODMANHOOD.
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  • Sanjukta Nag (11/4/2015 12:22:00 AM)


    Well written with such a philosophical depth. symbolic indeed. Great work! (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/3/2015 11:02:00 AM)


    I breath by your lungs,
    I smell by your nose
    Chakras may combine,
    But it’s dark for a rose..........Deeply envisioned. Sweet expression. Thanks for sharing.
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  • (11/3/2015 7:49:00 AM)


    I breath by your lungs.. Sweet lines... Love it.. Thanks for poem dear poet (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 3, 2015



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