As A Blank Sheet Poem by Liza Sud

As A Blank Sheet



As a blank crisp sheet
Falling from my hand –
In a room a sin,
Flowing from your side!

I breath by your lungs,
I smell by your nose
Chakras may combine,
But it’s dark for a rose.

Tuesday, November 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: religious
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 04 November 2015

This is a poem extolling physical intimacy affirming spiritual intimacy; outer senses blend and inner senses or chakras blend. What was just a blank sheet is now electrified with psychic energy. Just to the right of the box I'm typing PH placed a list of RELATED POEMS-two are by the visionary William Blake, his early poem uniting opposites called THE MARRIAGE OF HEAVEN AND HELL (the ultimate pair of opposites unified!) and his last major poem JERUSALEM. I wrote a term paper on Jerusalem in college.Blake's ideas are like Solovyov's GODMANHOOD.

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Sanjukta Nag 04 November 2015

Well written with such a philosophical depth. symbolic indeed. Great work!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 November 2015

I breath by your lungs, I smell by your nose Chakras may combine, But it’s dark for a rose..........Deeply envisioned. Sweet expression. Thanks for sharing.

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Mannah Shekh 03 November 2015

I breath by your lungs.. Sweet lines... Love it.. Thanks for poem dear poet

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