Dawn tolls newness full to the brim
by incoming of the golden sun
oh behold! glow by gleams of light
green when aspires to be enlightened
where is the reeks by riff of reason?
yet life is a bliss of blessing divine
moment moves faster by change of hours
today is someway obsessive than yesteryear
tomorrow is yet uncertain by probability
difference intones by heaves of mystery
as day reels through freshness by newness
prime motto of living is simply love and peace.
From : Harold K Schreiberg (London/ Orleans United Kingdom; Male; 47) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 1/10/2010 4: 18: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Good morning, dear poet friend, Thank you for your kind wishes I am sorry I haven't been able to answer more quickly but the PoemHunter site would not open! Your poems are full of striking images & rhythm, an excellent job !
prime motto of living is simply love and peace. ...................................................................... subhendu, is nice, I agree with you..10..... Tsira
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wonderful visual metaphor '' Dawn tolls newness full to the brim by incoming of the golden sun'' excellent meditative poem, very well expressed ideas, thank you for sharing 10/10/10